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雅思寫作高分句子：3分鐘學會一個雅思7分句系列(三十一)

2021/6/3 14:25:41來源：新航道作者：新航道

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摘要：新航道雅思小編之前分享了新航道老師帶來的3分鐘學會一個雅思7分句系列，今天繼續分享這個系列的句式之3分鐘學會一個雅思7分句系列(31)，成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。

新航道雅思小編之前分享了新航道老師帶來的3分鐘學會一個雅思7分句系列，今天繼續分享這個系列的句式之3分鐘學會一個雅思7分句系列(31)，成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。

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學生有兩句是這么寫的：

The most noteworthy region is North America, where average protein and calories all rank the first with an average grams of protein approaches 80 and calories reaches 3500. Meanwhile, North America has the largest intake of animal protein (62).

※ 細節也很關鍵，部分圖表的數據單位在圖表左側，考生可不能忽視不寫。

教師修改后如下：

The most noteworthy region is North America, where average protein and calorie intake both rank the highest, with respectively 80 grams and 3500 grams per person per day. Additionally, it is the only region with more animal protein intake than other proteins: 62 grams versus 18 grams.

※ 本期，我們來比較一下兩個銜接詞(meanwhile和additionally)的區別：

meanwhile

1)指“同時”：Bake the aubergines till soft. Meanwhile, heat the oil in a heavy pan.

2)指“在此期間”：You needn't worry; I'll be ready to greet them. Meanwhile I'm off to discuss the Fowlers' party with Felix.

3)強調“另一面”：You throw food away, and meanwhile children are starving all over the world.

additionally

1)介紹“另外的內容/原因等”：You can pay bills over the Internet. Additionally, you can check your balance or order statements.

2)指“發生的程度比以前更甚”：The birds are additionally protected in the reserves at Birsay.

3分鐘過去了，你學會了嗎?

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